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Friday, June 17, 2016

100 WC

              Little Yellow Airplane 



Today was Thursday which means that I have to go to Violin class. I loves playing the Violin it's one of my favourite hobby's. Every Thursday is always a rush day, because Mum would have to pick me up from school and then head straight to the Volin school. As usual I would sit in the back of the car and look at the view. Today something really caught my attention, a yellow airplane swept through the sky and towards a bird. Suddenly he opened his big mouth and...
" MUM A BIRD JUST GOT EATEN BY AN AIRPLANE!"
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12 comments:

  1. Allan RobertsonJune 17, 2016 at 12:31 PM

    What a fantastic and fantastical story. I adore the ending. I love the way the ending was a total surprise. I look forward to your next 100 Word Challenge.

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    1. AnonymousJune 29, 2016 at 2:14 PM

      Thanks Mr Robertson,
      give you a little hit is about a person in jail. ;)

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  2. AnonymousJune 21, 2016 at 11:11 AM

    Emily I like your 100wc it is funny and interesting

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  3. AnonymousJune 28, 2016 at 7:20 PM

    Ha Ha! That is brilliant! I lOVE the ending!!!
    You did such a great job!
    There are a lot of exclamation marks in this comment!!!

    Nikita :)

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    1. AnonymousJune 29, 2016 at 2:15 PM

      Thanks so much Nitika,
      But you're still better at writing !!

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    2. AnonymousJune 29, 2016 at 2:15 PM

      Thanks so much Nitika,
      But you're still better at writing !!

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  4. AnonymousJune 29, 2016 at 10:26 AM


    Hi Emily,
    I liked your story.
    It was just so peaceful and then there was a sudden suprise!
    How long did it take to do this piece of writing?

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    1. AnonymousJune 29, 2016 at 2:10 PM

      Thanks Ariana
      It took around 30-40 minutes I think.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 11, 2016 at 1:46 PM

    Hi Emily
    I really like your story.
    Because it is cool and interesting story!
    - Jorja

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  6. UnknownAugust 30, 2016 at 2:54 PM

    Hi Emily.
    Good piece of writing! One mistake is that the second sentence doesn't make sense. Have you ever thought of using a simile?

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