Surfing Poem
I can hear waves crashing into the rocks when I climbed up the big rock cave.
I can hear people yelling “I did it, I did it” when I’m surfing.
I can touch the water dripping from the board when I’m dragging my board on the wet sand.
I can touch the sand sticking all over my wet suit.
I can see people walking their dogs when I’m surfing on the waves.
I can see a big spider climbing up as we did on the rock cave.
I can taste salt all over my mouth which taste like french fries but ten time more stronger.
I can taste salt in my pasta salad at lunch time.
I can smell the fishes in the water from miles away.
I can smell salty air just casually wandering around.
This is awesome Emily, I love the your poem. Can't wait to hear more:)
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Clearview School
DeleteThanks Clo miss you so much!
How's your new school?
Em
Yaldhurst Model School
Wow Emily you look like a natural surfer. Well you will look like a natural surfer with more practise. The wonderful thing about surfing is that it is great fun even when you fall off. You must have a very strong sense of smell to be able to smell the fish in the ocean. I think it is great that you are considering joining a surfing club. Will you do any more research about surfing before you decide? I look forward to your next blog post.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic poem to go along with your video Emily! You did such a great job on the board - what a natural. I'm looking forward to the next WPCA Outdoor Challenge...and your next blog post! :)
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